Thesis Examples

Topic: George S. Patton

Occasion: George Patton was a general in the U.S. army during WWII. He was a very strict, professional soldier. He led American troops to victory in Germany.

Position: George Patton was the most influential general in the U.S. army during World War II.

Evidence: 1. Patton was appointed commander of the U.S. army troops fighting in Germany.

2. Patton led by example. He was a strong, brave soldier not afraid to put himself in harms' way.

3. Patton inspired U.S. army troops to fight courageously as they won victory after victory under his command.

Thesis:

As a strict, professional soldier in the U.S. army during World War II, George S. Patton had the most influence in the success of the U.S. army. As the commander of U.S. army troops in Europe, he led by example and inspired U.S. troops to fight courageously in every battle. Despite the fact that Dwight D. Eisenhower was the Commander of all U.S. fighting forces he did not have as important an impact on U.S. troops. Everyday, Patton fought alongside the soldiers he commanded serving as a role model and inspiration for his troops.